Literature Review

As I was re-reading through my story, I changed my point of view and tried to read as if I was seeing it through someone else’s eyes. I noticed that I made a lot of punctuation mistakes which is very common for me. I tend to put commas and periods in the wrong places. I also noticed that I had a couple grammar mistakes that I could easily fix. My story was based around the early 1900’s and it was about a boy who worked on a family’s farm to provide for his mother and sister who were sick. I feel like I could’ve thought of a better story line, but I had to to get it finished as soon as possible so I just tried to write a story with the idea I had in mind. As I was reading throughout the story, I realized I didn’t use very much figurative language and that’s definitely something I need to improve.

2 thoughts on “Literature Review

  1. “I changed my point of view and tried to read as if I was seeing it through someone else’s eyes.”

    It’s amazing how different your story can seem when you know someone else is reading it. I’m glad you were able to make some improvements.

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