As I was re-reading through my story, I changed my point of view and tried to read as if I was seeing it through someone else’s eyes. I noticed that I made a lot of punctuation mistakes which is very common for me. I tend to put commas and periods in the wrong places. I also noticed that I had a couple grammar mistakes that I could easily fix. My story was based around the early 1900’s and it was about a boy who worked on a family’s farm to provide for his mother and sister who were sick. I feel like I could’ve thought of a better story line, but I had to to get it finished as soon as possible so I just tried to write a story with the idea I had in mind. As I was reading throughout the story, I realized I didn’t use very much figurative language and that’s definitely something I need to improve.