After reading the story by author Sydney Hay, I thought that the story was very fun. I think that it would make a wonderful chapter book for kids. The title, Imagination Land makes me smile and goes to show how fun it will be. The story is about a little girl, Sky that loves imagination. She has grown up with it, and really used it to shape her life. She makes everything fun and exciting. When she goes to the first grade story telling festival, she is hoping to win, but she doesn’t know the impact she had on a girl in her class. I think that the author gave it a good meaning to show kids that they can be nice and fix problems on their own by just being kind. This story could have some room for improvement. I think that the author could of included a few more figurative language sentences. This story was great, but not mastery level quite yet.