Suspense and Word Choice in a Freewrite

There a kind of beast that walks the earth it has ears sharp as knives and eyes that seemingly glow at night they take joy from there cruel way of mangling there pray and slowly killing them. They have sharp claws and teeth for ripping there pray up and a fur cote to protect them from the cold. They hunt during the night and sleep during the day. If you where to see one of these creatures you might find yourself being happy and exited because these creatures are cats.

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  1. This is a great story! i want to read the rest of it when you are done haha good luck finishing it


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