suspense and word choice

One day a kid wanted to go to a movie with his friend. He had asked his mom if he could go he promised he would be back before 10:00 and don’t take the short cut home. He left and walked to the movie with his friend it was 8:30 when they finished. He then diced to go to his friends and play video games. They go to his house and played the game he lost track of time and it was 10:00 exactly he knew if he was a little late it will be OK he also new that it take five mins to take the short cut 10 mins if he didn’t. so he took the short cut through the graveyard he thought why did my mom not want me to take this way home? He suddenly heard a cluck cluck! cluck cluck! he started walking faster he herd it cluck cluck walk faster with him he started running cluck cluck! he ran finally got home and the door was locked he looked at the time it was 10:20 he hears clunk clunk! He bangs on the door! let me in he yells finally in a relief his mom let him in he never took the short cut again.

2 Comments on suspense and word choice

  1. Mr. Green
    November 15, 2019 at 4:06 pm (6 months ago)

    Be sure to add a picture for aesthetic appeal and full credit!

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  2. Tori
    December 20, 2019 at 3:36 pm (5 months ago)

    I liked the story, but what was making the cluck! noise?

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