My story was a very different one. I read about how this man fell in love with a fish. She ended up turning into a women. It was definitely a very different and interesting story to read. This story helped me understand that there is a lot of varieties of people all over the world. What I love about it, is that everyone is getting accepted to who they are. That is very important. In this story, it had a lot of parts that gave good information about what we were learning about. It was also good for giving details about everything. For example, “This riverbank has beautiful scenery, fresh air, and the most fertile land. His daily works are cultivating the land, collecting vegetables and firewood. He was also catching fish for his meal.” This made the story better by explaining with good detail.
They had good syntax sentences. Their sentences were broken up in to smaller sentences to add more dialog to the story. This made it easier to read. The theme of this story would be that things happen, and sometimes they do not seem of what they should be, but good can come out of it. I feel like that is super important also. You have to give everything a chance, because you never know. The detail that helped me was the guy falling in love with a fish, but turned into a women. In Indonesia, they go fishing. They do some of the same activities that we do. Indonesia is different than us in many ways. But, it is also similar in other ways.