Suspense and word choice in a freewrite

It was late at night me and my two sisters were home alone. We kept hearing noises and we thought someone making the sounds and just wanted to scared us. After we both told each other to stop but it wasn’t none of us. Also like 10 minutes later my parents came home with my other two siblings, and I go upstairs and go to sleep and since both of my two older sister sleep down stairs one of them heard a knock on the window and she tired to ignore it and it happened again so she leaves to my older sister room. The next day they both go outside to check if there were foot steps and they were.

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