Suspense and Word Choice in a Freewrite

once a long night there was a guy named mr  green he was a very happy man but intill this halloween  night he was taking he kids out for trick or treating and they came upon this weird looking house they says this house had the weirdest treats in there but when Mr green went into the house he found his good old friend Ahsan  he never seen Ahsan in 3 years buddy got a Job he got married and he got a nice car but he has a weird house and Mr green asked ahsan why you have all these good stuff but you have a weird houses. and then ahsan went into his house and cried

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